Sensory Abstraction – First Print of Draft – Project Six (2110)

Instruction

Print out a 30″ by 30″ version of your draft – no color – on normal printer paper. Critique.

 

Purpose

Get feedback on your design and improve on it. See how your poster will truly look in person and adjust accordingly, should you need to. Focus on details and what catches the eye.

 

My Interpretation

After receiving critique on my draft, I changed a lot of details around on my poster. Most prominently, I changed the colored bits on the re-design to be larger, have more weight, and match and mimic the rest of the composition in its overall feel of size, scale, and space creating unity. I flipped around the bottom waves for balance and adjusted them so they don’t draw too much attention to themselves. Finally, I fixed overlapping issues of useless small and unintentional spaces and rearranged some background curves to be more appealing and move the eye around the piece more.

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