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-Wow your piece on the top left with the wolf is fantastic. The simplicity is perfect for the piece because of the intricate creature. It is very well balances and has great composition. I like the way the piece flows in one direction making it very easy to view and take in.
-Your symmetrical piece, the one on the bottom, is ver nice too but seems unbalanced. The reflection on the right side with the largest piece reflected seems out of place. To fix this maybe add some other larger shapes on the other sides and decrease the size of the large shape on the right side and add some smaller figures in on that side.
I’m not sure if this is what you mean, but it did load sideways for some reason. The right side is supposed to be on the bottom. However, I would agree that that shape seems out of proportion to the rest of the piece.
I love all of your notans. They are extremely interesting and very clean. My favorite one is the first one with the the creature in it. It is simple but it works for that notan. For the second one, I just wonder how it would look if you decided to go the symmetrical approach.