The asymmetrical piece is my favorite. I really like the way you used the cut outs as a reflection of the negitive space. I especially like how the center piece is an oval and not just a square like the video showed. The radial notan looks like it was very challenging to cut out. I think all your notans turned out great.
The piece that is best executed I would say is the last piece, the geometric symmetrical piece. The pieces are cutout very sharply and are perfect replicas of each other. The negative and positive space is very balanced. The piece is very easily identifiable.
The second red piece there is a poor balance of space, the top there is a lot going on, while the bottoms seems to have a void. If the piece was turned I believe the space could have been utilized more effectively.
The asymmetrical piece is my favorite. I really like the way you used the cut outs as a reflection of the negitive space. I especially like how the center piece is an oval and not just a square like the video showed. The radial notan looks like it was very challenging to cut out. I think all your notans turned out great.
The piece that is best executed I would say is the last piece, the geometric symmetrical piece. The pieces are cutout very sharply and are perfect replicas of each other. The negative and positive space is very balanced. The piece is very easily identifiable.
The second red piece there is a poor balance of space, the top there is a lot going on, while the bottoms seems to have a void. If the piece was turned I believe the space could have been utilized more effectively.