Kaitlyn Evans

GMOs

        When one thinks of a GMO, they often think of serious health effects or maybe they do not even know what GMOs are in modern day terminology. In recent years, the media has drawn a large attention to GMOs and most of the public eye does not know anything about the subject. Well, a GMO or generically modified organism is an organism whose genes have been modified so that the organism can perform better under a certain environment. The process is simply speeding up natural selection. Something that humans have been doing long before Darwin discovered natural selection (University of Georgia).

        In today’s world, GMOs are used in many crops and are referred to as GM crops. In the U.S., there are eight GM crops commercially grown including cotton, sugar beet, soybean, corn, canola, papaya, alfalfa, and summer squash (Byrne). This poses a question from many consumers that purchase products made from these crops, are GM foods safe to eat? GM crops are tightly regulated by several government bodies and undergo safety testing before being commercialized (Key).  Three U.S. government entities have authority to regulate GM crops, the United States Department of Agriculture, the Environmental Protection Agency, and the Food and Drug Administration (Byrne). Foods from GM crops have been consumed by millions of people all over the world for over 15 years, with no reported effects (Key).

        Overall, GMO crops have many advantages. In the developing world, 840 million people are undernourished, surviving on fewer than 2000 calories a day and many do not have a reliable food source (Key).  For example, the Golden Rice Project was started where GMO rice was developed to produce more Vitamin A to prevent deficiency in developing countries. Vitamin A deficiency causes blindness and death to 2 million children each year (Key). The Golden Rice provides 50% of  vitamin A for children (Key).

        In addition, the world’s population is predicted to double over the next 40 years, with over 95% of humans being born in developing countries (Key).  It is estimated that to meet these increased demands, food production must increase by at least 40% with decreasing fertile lands and water resources. GMO technologies are one of several different approaches to combat these problems. GM crops produce a higher yield than non-GM crops and promote efficient land use. Along with higher yields, the price of food decreases.

        In conclusion, next time you see a GMO label on food products at the grocery store think about what it means. It is a proven fact that the United States has the safest food supply in the world. Next time you hear someone say GMOs are bad for your health let them know that studies show no harmful health effect and let them know the advantages of GMOs. With the world population expected to reach 9.7 billion people by 2050 higher crop yields in result of using GMOs are not a bad thing. They add more nutritional value to food at a lower price and in an efficient way. It is common sense to support the production of GM crops.

Resources

Bryne, P. “Genetically Modified (GM) Crops: Techniques and Applications – 0.710.” Colorado   State University Extension,

        http://extension.colostate.edu/topic-areas/agriculture/genetically-modified-gm-crops-  techniques-and-applications-0-710/ Accessed 6 Feb. 2017

“Genetically Modified Crops.” Mission 2014,

        http://12.000.scripts.mit.edu/mission2014/genetically-modified-crops Accessed 6 Feb. 2017

Key, Suzie. Ma, Julian. Drake, Pascal. “Genetically modified plants and human health.” US       National Library of Medicine. 1 Jun. 2008,

        https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2408621/

“Selective Breeding or Artificial Selection.” University of Georgia, 24 Nov. 2013,

        http://wallace.genetics.uga.edu/groups/evol3000/wiki/ce8b9/Selective_Breeding_or_A rtificial_Selection.html

“World population projected to reach 9.7 billion by 2050.” United States Department of Economic and Social Affairs, 29 July 2015,

        http://www.un.org/en/development/desa/news/population/2015-report.html

5 thoughts on “Kaitlyn Evans

  1. Kaitlyn,
    I enjoyed reading your essay. You address both sides of the argument and support your side very well.
    My suggestion would to maybe address exactly why some people think GMOs are bad and why those assumptions are wrong. Also, in the last paragraph, I would include a comma after 2050.
    Good job!

    -Maris

  2. Kaitlyn,
    Coming from a person who did not know too much about genetically modified organisms, I would start off your essay saying what GMO stands for so people know off the bat what you are going to discuss. Also, maybe avoid using acronyms in your title. In your last paragraph I would also add a comma after 2050, otherwise it is a run-on sentence. I enjoyed learning about how GMOs can help feed a larger population and think you made great points to support your argument. Overall the essay was very persuasive, but I think your topic may be too narrow when talking about supporting GMO crops because a lot of people who do not have experience with GMOs wouldn’t understand and therefore not have common sense about the issue. Maybe you could approach the topic at a different angle, but your writing and detail was awesome.
    -Hallie

  3. Kaitlyn,
    I really enjoyed your essay. You covered the topic of GMOs very well. I especially liked how you addressed the benefits of the Golden Rice Project to help Vitamin A deficiencies in developing countries. I also liked how at the end you reminded people to keep an open mind the next time they see a GMO label on food products. It addresses both sides of the argument very well by doing this. I don’t have any suggestions for you, good job!
    -Haley

  4. Kaitlyn,
    What I found most intriguing about this essay is the new infortmation it provides to the reader. I now feel as if I have a comfortable understanding of GMO’s and their benefits, knowledge I did not have prior. You did a good job of providing real world examples of GMO’s possibilities, as in the Golden Rice Project. Great Essay

    – Andrew Vonderhaar

  5. Kaitlyn,
    It’s really great and intriguing to learn new things and related perspectives about GMO in your passage. The introduction and point of views of both sides really inform me a lot. Well, admittedly I know really a few about GMO before since the lack of noticing, but overall the passage is quite easy for people with little knowledge of GMO to read. Overall, you did a great job!
    — Dongyuan Chen

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