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In Review: I liked the way you compared and contrasted fictional and nonfictional events. I think that was a creative and useful way in getting your point across. It is organized well with beginning with Shawshank, and tie it all together in the end with referring back to the movie. Overall very good paper. -Cristin
In Review: Your perspective and opinion on abortion was interesting to read about. I especially liked the way that you incorporated so statistics into it to really prove your case. You also brought a new perspective to light that I was unaware of about the diseases. Very well written and you did a good job of getting your point across. -Marissa
In Review: Your writing is really great. Reading the statistics that texting and driving can cause really puts it in perspective. It’s such an important problem in today’s world, and I think more light should be shed on this topic. It really made me think about how many times I have partaken in this dangerous activity. -Izzy
In Review: This paper was really interesting! I don’t know much about NASA or space, but this brought to me a genuine interest. You were very knowledgeable in your writing and seem to be passionate about how these lives may have been taken unnecessarily. I enjoyed learning something new, and it is so important to note societal pressures in our everyday lives. Great job! -Elianna
Rachael Sweetman
In Review: I liked your paper because it was about a topic I had never thought about before now! You made a lot of good points about why technology should be more a focus within schools, and I agree with you. I think citing sources made your paper stronger, and showed that these were not statements you made without careful thought. I don’t have much constructive criticism. -Jackie
In Review: I really enjoyed reading this paper, you brought across some great points about parenting and the way children should be treated. I think you should hit harder on the bad parenting aspect, about how if parents raised their kids correctly then leashes wouldn’t be necessary. Overall great paper, can be a little informal at times, but you still get your point across very well. -Rachael