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Nice job Ava! I can tell you took the time to document your drawings carefully and I can also tell you looked for ways to use line to mark texture / light value instead of simply shading. This makes for clear and careful observational drawings.
However, I would challenge you on your subjective line drawing to vary your marks even more. Can you make some parts of the contour line of the object you are looking at really thick or heavy and then some lighter or thin? It seems like for this drawing you mostly used a light line. Also be careful about drawing over the same line too many times, or the drawing can become muddy quickly when you begin to add more info.