Applying the Toulmin Model to “Coral Reef Microbes Point to New Way to Assess Ecosystem Health”

LINK TO ARTICLE: coral-reef-microbes-point-assess-ecosystem 

 

The Toulmin model is a rhetorical analysis method used for identifying part of an argument. Today, I am going to be applying and explaining the Toulmin model by analyzing “Coral Reef Microbes Point to New Way to Assess Ecosystem Health” written by Hayley Dunning. 

The first part of the Toulmin model includes the claim, the claim refers to its central assertion, this can also be called a thesis. Hayley Dunning argues that a new study shows that ocean acidification is changing microbes in coral reefs which could be widely used to assess ecosystems. 

The next part of the Toulmin model is the grounds, this can be described as a foundation/justification to which the claim depends upon. In this article, Dunning supports her idea that changing microbes in coral reefs can be used to assess ecosystems by justifying that “how ecosystems are changing in response to human activity allows predictions of their future, and how to conserve them. 

The next part of the Toulmin model is the warrant, which is the connection between the ground and claim. It must be agreed upon to be successful, and it is sometimes assumed rather than stated explicitly. In this case, the warrant is the assumption that many people do not know that reefs grow near natural carbon dioxide vents on the ocean floor. These vents can later be used to understand the changing of ecosystems such as acidification and increase of oceanic CO2 levels. 

Furthermore, the backing follows the warrant: backing refers to additional support for the warrant. It can take the form of examples or additional specific evidence. Following the paragraph that Dunning mentions CO2 vents on the ocean floor, she continues to explain how scientists measure these changes. She writes, “they used genetic sequencing and mass spectrometry to determine the microbes and metabolites present in each sample… They found that as the amount of CO2 increased, the microbes and metabolites found in the community of reef macro-organisms became more similar to those in the sediment” (Dunning). 

The next part of this model includes the qualifier, this refers to a word or phrase that adds additional complexity to the argument. For example: nearly, certainly, most generally, probably. Despite having trouble finding specific qualifiers in the article, there are many quotes that add complexity to arguments. Jake Williams states, “Intensifying human activity and the climate crisis are increasing stress on ecosystems across the globe. But we lack general and robust ways of monitoring this stress and how ecosystems are responding.” Jake Williams ensures readers that the climate crisis is increasing stress on ecosystems, thus urging readers to think about their effect on the environment. 

Lastly, the rebuttal is an acknowledgement made to invite reflection from an audience. Dunnings writes about scholars differing opinions on the use of microbes and metabolites to measure change in climate. Some disagree that this could be applicable to every single ecosystem while other scholars disagree. Jake Williams states, “ideally, these metrics shouldnt depend on what type of ecosystem you are looking at, but be applicable in every system from coral reefs to rainforests.” 

 

Circulatory Fashion: A New Method for Sustainability?

Fast Fashion’s Issues

It’s no secret that the fashion industry is not sustainable. Trends come and go and large fast fashion brands mass produce clothing with little regard for the environment. Currently, the fashion industry implements a linear model that consists of producing clothing that ultimately ends up in landfills after a few wears. This model of consumption leads to overproduction and overconsumption thus, increasing waste and destroying the environment. 

A New Model?

But there is a different model on the rise for the fashion industry! A circular model for the fashion industry consists of keeping waste and pollution out and the reuse of products and materials for as long as possible. This practice aims to create a closed-looped system to reduce waste and maximize the lifespan of products. This idea sounds great but is it truly possible for a massive industry that produces over 97 million tons of waste to adapt this new model?

Current Implementation

Some sustainable fashion brands have already introduced the idea of circulatory fashion into their production. Reformation places a high emphasis on the fact that their clothing is created from fibers that are designed for durability and longevity. Reformation even urges their customers to resell or recycle their clothes once the consumer is “done” with them to decrease waste.

Further Implementation?

Although this model is already being implemented in some fashion brands, I wonder if the fashion industry is truly capable of making this massive shift towards sustainability. Author of Sustainable Fashion Forum gives five key aspects that brands need to achieve in order to follow the circular model. “Design for Longevity and Durability: Garments are designed to be durable, timeless, and high quality, encouraging longer lifespans and reducing the need for frequent replacements. Materials and Production Methods: Emphasis is placed on using sustainable and eco-friendly materials, incorporating recycled or upcycled fabrics, and employing production methods that minimize waste and environmental impact. Extended Use and Reuse: Circular fashion encourages clothing rental, resale markets (such as second-hand stores or online platforms), and clothing swaps to extend the life of garments beyond a single owner’s use. Repair, Remake, and Recycling: Promoting repair services, encouraging consumers to mend or alter garments, and facilitating recycling or upcycling of old clothes into new products are vital elements of circular fashion.Closing the Loop: Creating systems where garments can be fully recycled or biodegrade at the end of their life cycle, minimizing landfill waste and allowing materials to be reused in new clothing or other products.”

 

Unfortunately, although this model seems highly appealing for those who have respect for the environment, the likelihood of large companies implementing this model is very slim. To become sustainable, brands would have to remodel their entire production system and pour money into better materials. 

 

“What Is Circular Fashion?” The Sustainable Fashion Forum, The Sustainable Fashion Forum, 10 Dec. 2023, www.thesustainablefashionforum.com/pages/what-is-circular-fashion.